求英语作文 what do you think are the qualifications a

你认为现代社会什么素质是一个成功人士必备的？
In today's society,how to become a successful man is most people's dream. However,the successful men are just the small number of people. To be successful, I believe successful man has the qualifications the common person don't have.
So what are these qualifications?Firstly,saving the time. The successful man tries their best to make good use of time, for he believe if he doesn't save time, others will catch his steps. Secondly, working hard. When others are entertaining, he still works hard. Thirdly, controling his motion. There are some stresses that will disturb many people's motion. However, the successful man can usually control his motion well. Finally, the distribution heart. This man has the great heart to distribute himself to his country. And just because of this spirit, he can receive his values and dreams.
All in all, if we want to become a successful man, we need to have these qualifications to achieve our dream.

Success comes with hard work.In order to succeed you must have the desire and the determination to succeed.Not many people will be successful in life but success can be achieved.Here are some tips to succeed.
First you must believe in yourself and your ability to succeed.
Work Hard and be very discipline.Success do not come overnight,you must work hard for it and be discipline.
Balance your life.It is important that we remember that even as we work hard we should take some time to have fun.
Take time to educate yourself and become qualified.Never assume that you learn as much and that your job is safe.