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Yan Dear Teacher: My name is xxx, this 20-year-old, from Yiwu City, Zhejiang Province. I studied at the Zhejiang College of traffic, majoring in computer, about to graduate, so to find a suitable job. I usually like the Internet, music, reading books and a number of outdoor sports. In school, I seriously learning professional knowledge, proficiency in professional skills, in addition I also took an active part and the competition time in high school, not only through the NCRE at the provincial level, and many times the "cultural activist", " outstanding members of the Student Union "and other awards. The use of extra-curricular time to practice outside and experience the life, work units have been well learned how to live among people, a man of courtesy, patience and careful work. Believe me, I would work a serious and responsible, but not the best, only better

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Yan Dear Teacher: My name is xxx, this 20-year-old, from Yiwu City, Zhejiang Province. I studied at the Zhejiang College of traffic, majoring in computer, about to graduate, so to find a suitable job. I usually like the Internet, music, reading books and a number of outdoor sports. In school, I seriously learning professional knowledge, proficiency in professional skills, in addition I also took an active part and the competition time in high school, not only through the NCRE at the provincial level, and many times the "cultural activist", " outstanding members of the Student Union "and other awards. The use of extra-curricular time to practice outside and experience the life, work units have been well learned how to live among people, a man of courtesy, patience and careful work. Believe me, I would work a serious and responsible, but not the best, only better
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Yan Dear Teacher: My name is xxx, this 20-year-old, from Yiwu City, Zhejiang Province. I studied at the Zhejiang College of traffic, majoring in computer, about to graduate, so to find a suitable job. I usually like the Internet, music, reading books and a number of outdoor sports. In school, I seriously learning professional knowledge, proficiency in professional skills, in addition I also took an active part and the competition time in high school, not only through the NCRE at the provincial level, and many times the "cultural activist", " outstanding members of the Student Union "and other awards. The use of extra-curricular time to practice outside and experience the life, work units have been well learned how to live among people, a man of courtesy, patience and careful work. Believe me, I would work a serious and responsible, but not the best, only better