小型货运企业small-sized freight transportation enterprises(文章后面出现的应该缩写)
“现行状况的调查、研究、分析和查阅相关资料”病句!!
“研究、分析”的是状况呢?还是“相关资料”呢?调查后面应该是逗号而不是顿号吧?根据我的理解做了休整!
现行状况 current situation
运行现状running status
调度系统scheduling system
合理性和安全性 rationality and security
B/S结构: Browse/Server structure
MVC(M是应用对象Model,V是他的屏幕上的表示View,C是定语用户界面对用户输入的响应方式Controller)写论文时由于是摘要,这些罗嗦的解释不要写上去,是个行内人士都明白的。在introduction部分可以写。
三层式“JSP”开发模式three-tier JSP developmental mode
JSP:JAVA Server Pages的缩写
“使一些SSFTE采用该系统以后将简化其工作流程:病句!!
建议改成“使一些SSFTE采用该系统以后工作流程简化”
或者“使采用该系统的SSFTE工作流程简化”
进一步讲:要简化的当然是采用了该系统,根本不必说明的。
附带的一些管理功能 attached management functions
“提高一些管理水平较差的小型货运企业的在人事和数据方面的管理水平”冗余句子!!!
当然是水平差的才需要提高啊!根据我的理解作乐修改。
The author understood the running status and grasped the requirement of the scheduling system of the small-sized freight transportation enterprises (SSFTE), according to the investigation of the current situation of SSFTE, combined with the research, analysis, and reference of relative datum, and designed the applicable scheduling system according to the current SSFTE status. Consider of its rationality and security, this design used Java language as its basic designing language combined with Model-View-Controller (MVC) which is the popular developmental mode of three-tier Java Server Pages (JSP), and developed a set of SSFTE scheduling system with Browse/Server (B/S) structure. This will simplify SSFTE process,consummate the management of the enterprises, improve their working efficiency, thus standardize their data management, reduce their operational cost, and improve their whole efficiency. Additionally, the attached management functions of the software may improve the personnel and data management of some some-sized SSFTE.
According to the small freight transportation enterprise present
condition investigation, the research, the analysis and the consult
correlation data, had understood the small freight transportation
enterprise's movement present situation, has grasped the dispatch
system demand. And the basis small freight transportation enterprise's
present situation designs suits the current small freight
transportation enterprise the dispatch system. Based on the
rationality and the secure consideration, this design will use "JAVA"
the language underlie design language, the use immediately the popular
three types "JSP" development pattern □MVC (M applies object Model,
V will be on his screen expression View, C is attribute user contact
surface to user input response way Controller), will develop a set of
B/S structure the small freight transportation enterprise to dispatch
the system. Will cause some small freight transportation enterprises
to use this system later to simplify its work flow, the improvement
business management, will enhance the working efficiency, and will be
allowed the standard its data management, thus will reduce its
enterprise operation cost, will enhance the enterprise benefit. But
this software supplements some management functions also may enhance
some management level worse small freight transportation enterprises
at the human affairs and the data aspect management level.
According to to the inquisition of small scaled current condition of the freight transportation business enterprise, study, analyze and check related data, understood the movement present condition of small scaled freight transportation business enterprise, controled to adjust the need of one degree system.The present condition which combines according to the small scaled freight transportation business enterprise designs an in keeping with current small scaled freight transportation business enterprise to adjust one degree system.According to the consideration of the rationality and the safety, that design's willing adopt "JAVA" language is a foundation design language, use three layers of at that moment popular development mode-MVC(M is applied object Model, the V is meaning of his screen View, the C is a language customer interface certainly to the customer inputs of respond to way Controller) of type"JSP"s, develop a set of B/S structure of the small scaled freight transportation business enterprise adjust one degree system.Make some small scaled freight transportation business enterprises adopt that system hereafter will simplify its workflow, improve a business enterprise management, exaltation work efficiency, and can manage by the norm its data, lower its business enterprise luck camp cost thus, raise a business enterprise performance.And that software a little bit supplementary management function can also raise the management level in the personnel and the data of the worse small scaled freight transportation business enterprise of some management levels.
According to to the small scaled freight transportation business enterprise inquisition, research, analysis of the current condition and check the related data, understand the movement present condition of the small scaled freight transportation business enterprise, control to adjust the need of one degree system.Combine according to the small scaled freight transportation business enterprise of present condition design an in keeping with current small scaled freight transportation business enterprise to adjust one degree system.According to the consideration of the rationality and safety, should design will adopt" JAVA" language to be the foundation design language, using at that moment popular three layer type" JSP" development mode- MVCs( M is applied the object Model, the V is his screen up of mean the View, the C is certainly the language customer interface to input to the customer of respond to the way Controller)s, the small scaled freight transportation business enterprise that develops a set of B/ S structure adjusts one degree system.Make some small scaled freight transportation business enterprises adopt that system hereafter will simplify its workflow, improve the business enterprise management, the exaltation work efficiency, and can manage with the norm its data, thus lower its business enterprise luck camp cost, raise the business enterprise performance.And that software supplementary some management functionses can also raise the management level in personnel and data of some freight transportation business enterprises with worse and small scaled management level.
Deeply grateful!
本想译一下……一看你的原文第一个句子就是病句(没主语……)所以我放弃了……
According to to the inquisition of small scaled current condition of the freight transportation business enterprise, study, analyze and check related data, understood the movement present condition of small scaled freight transportation business enterprise, controled to adjust the need of one degree system.The present condition which combines according to the small scaled freight transportation business enterprise designs an in keeping with current small scaled freight transportation business enterprise to adjust one degree system.According to the consideration of the rationality and the safety, that design's willing adopt "JAVA" language is a foundation design language, use three layers of at that moment popular development mode-MVC(M is applied object Model, the V is meaning of his screen View, the C is a language customer interface certainly to the customer inputs of respond to way Controller) of type"JSP"s, develop a set of B/S structure of the small scaled freight transportation business enterprise adjust one degree system.Make some small scaled freight transportation business enterprises adopt that system hereafter will simplify its workflow, improve a business enterprise management, exaltation work efficiency, and can manage by the norm its data, lower its business enterprise luck camp cost thus, raise a business enterprise performance.And that software a little bit supplementary management function can also raise the management level in the personnel and the data of the worse small scaled freight transportation business enterprise of some management levels.
Deeply grateful!