初二英语作文修改，在线等，急！！各位请帮忙……谢谢！

看来你是要参加一个比赛吧 给你改一下 直接发改后的好了
Hello, every teacher. My name is Ann. I’m from Xinhua Middle School, and I’m fourteen years old. I’m happy to get a chance to take part in the competition. To be honest, I felt a bit nervous before I speak. But my mother told me to take a deep breath. Now, I feel more relax, and I think it’s a good idea and my mother is great. I have a small family, my father, mother and me, and we love each other. I have some hobbies, such as reading, painting, listening to music; I think hobbies can always make us grow as a person, develop our interests and help us learn new skills. I always spend some of my free time to do sports, because I think sports is very important for our health.And I am in my school volleyball team.I also like going shopping or having a picnic with friends on a clear day, I believe friendship can always make us feel happy and relax. I am proud that I have lots of friends now.

这上面是给你改过的 发现你比较喜欢用so but 这一些连词 所以句式有点重复 要尽量用一些不同的举行来表达

还有如果是自我介绍就有些不完整了 最好再说一说你对英语的喜爱 之类的

最后结尾： Archimedes said, "Give me a place to stand and I will move the Earth," and I want to say：Give me a chance and I will show you the best of me!

然后Thank you 就好了