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My dream
My dream is to be a sport player.I think sport player is a good job to make a lot of money ,and I can become very rich .When I become rich ,I will do lots of things ,for example,I will buy a big house with graden for my parents,I will travel around the world with my parents.I especially want to do the ting that is to help the persons in trouble and give a lot of money to the charities .There are my dreams ,I will work hard to make my dream come true.
我的梦想是成为一名运动员。我认为这是一个可以挣到很多钱的好工作，我可以变得富有。当我富有了我要做许多事情，例如，我将为我的父母买一个带花园的大房子,我将和我的父母一起周游全世界。我特别想做的一件事是帮助有困难的人们并且捐一些钱到慈善机构。这些就是我的梦想，我会努力工作（学习）来实现我的梦想

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Everyone has a dream.
Now I want to say something about my dream. What is my dream? I often ask myself. In my mind, everyone shall have his own dream. I think that having a dream means that we have an idea, and then we will do all the things to achieve the target. As long as we have a goal to be realized, we won’t be blind at least.
My dream is to become a successful doctor, helping those sick people and saving their lives. Of course, to be a good doctor is very difficult, but I will do whatever I can do to keep everyone healthy. That's my dream. I want to try my best to help the poor sick people of our country. I want to let them have an opportunity to receive excellent treatments for their illnesses without having to pay much or just enjoy them free. China is a developing country which needs good medicine and good doctors, especially in the countryside and distant villages.
Now I’m a junior student on Grade One, all my classmates and I are working hard. We all know that the entrance exam of high schools coming in the year of 2009 is a big challenge for us, so we must study harder and harder in order to go to a good high school. Thus after we finish our senior high school, we are able to go to a good university. Finally, we can find a good job in society.
My dream is also that although at present I’m good at study, I’ll still try my best to be the study winner. Now everything I do is close to my dream. I feel life is fill with hope and is colorful, and I have enough confidence to realize my dream.
I know that fantasy is something hard to realize, but dream can. I’ll work hard for my dreams, I’ll never give up.