英语作文 the changes in my hometown

There is just one best place for everyone,that is his nativetown.My hometown is called Taiping,which means peace in chinese, now gets more attractive.Taiping town is in Qinzhou State,Guangxi Province,belongs to the Linshan County.I can still remember what the town look like 10 years ago, poor and backward.Thanks to the country and its government, great changes have taken place in my hometown.Now,students here can go to school by bike,you can not imagine how students walked to school before.If you visited here,I can be veryproud to tell you our attractions.There are famous swimming pools and shopping center,you will besatisified with all things here. I love my hometown, that is to say,I will devoted myself to constructingmy hometown.If I can change something ,I will change the environment here, which can make the hometown better. In a word,I love my hometown, it's my green heaven.
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