英语翻译问题~在线急得~谢谢各位！！！！！！1

lz，这样翻译最好了：n_n
（本人系广东外语外贸大学高级翻译学院商务英语翻译研究生，请放心，本人绝对认真帮你翻译的！绝无机译或乱译成份在内!!)

请lz仔细对比和体会：

I am eager to elevate my foreign language ability to the level required by the university in three months' time after I'm enrolled in order to be formally accepted by your university. The time followed, I will learn from the vantages of my friends there with the aim to get customized into the new learning atmosphere as soon as possible. With a full use of the advanced teaching facilities and learning advantages along with the excellent teaching resources, I will endeavor to accomplish the acedemic program required in three or four years time and then return to my motherland. China has a fundamental tradition of filial piety. As the only child of my parents, I hope that I can provide a better living evironment for them with my own achievements. Both of my parents have always been frugal to save money for my future career, and I would permanently cherish this through my whole-hearted study abroad. I will come back and concentrate in their needs after I finished the whole range of my curriculum and research work. For most part of my wish, I would also try my best to promote Sino-Canadian academic exchanges and contacts. This is my plan. I really appreciate your patience to view it, thanks.

这才更加地道与符合中西方文化交流的特点，请楼主仔细体会n_n。

谢谢！！

I plan to get to school I 3 months after the University of time needed to reach the level of language and access to university, followed by the use of the advantages of students over there as fast as possible into the new learning environment, the use of school facilities, excellent teaching, Learning environment as well as the excellent team of teachers with their own resources and efforts with disdain 3-4 years to complete my university studies returned to the motherland. China attaches great importance to filial piety, as the home of the only son I also hope to use my ability and strength to give parents a better environment for parents to eat less and simple to use half of the non-return investment for me, I would make every effort to reach the Dream. I will treasure the school and returned after the serve and return that is when elderly parents make every effort to promote Sino-Canadian exchanges and contacts. That is my plan, thank you.

I intend to improve my language to the level required by a university in three monthes upon my arrival at the school and enter the university. Then, I will take advantage of my friends being there to customize into that new learning surroundings as soon as possible. with a full use of the advantageous teaching facilities and learning atmosphere and teacher resources, I will try my best to complete my acedemic program in three or four years and then come back to my motherland. China has a tradition of filial piety. As a single child, I hope that I am capable of providing a fine evironment to my parents. My parents has always been frugal for my dream. I cherish it so much that I will serve them whole heartedly after I have completed my program. In addition, I will try to do my bit to promote Sino-Canadian exchanges and contacts. All the above is my plan. Thanks for your patience.

如果你准备签证的时候这么说
就还是算了吧
泡了是肯定的