译成英语商务信函

Dear Mr.XXX,
Your (电指电报?传真,姑且用传真）fax dated 18th of this month was well received.
First of all, sorry for not having given you any news regarding the order so far. We have kept asking the factory to inform us of the exact date of delivery, and we think it is of no use to write to you before we get accurate news.
Now the factory agrees to make delivery within two weeks. And we are now arranging loading onto "Changjiang" vessel, which is scheduled to your port in the beginning of next month. We will immediately inform you by fax once the loading is finished.
We sincerely hope that the fact that we haven't contacted you in respect of order will not cause you any inconvinience, and hope that you will be fully satisfied with the goods.

XX先生：
本月18日来电收悉。
首先，对至今未向贵方提供有关这次订货的任何消息致歉。我方一直要求厂家提供确切的交货日期，我方觉得在获得肯定消息前给贵方写信将无济于事。
现在厂家已答应两周内交货。现正在安排“长江”轮装运，该轮定于下月初驶往你港。一旦装运船，我方将立即电告贵方。
忠心希望不会因未曾即使就上述订货与你方联系一事给你方造成不便，并希望该批货能使你方完全满意...

可以译为：

Sir XX:
Telephone to accept to know on the 18th of this month.
First, to up to now didn't provide relevant ny news which orders this time to extend apology toward you.We have been request a factory house to provide accurate date of delivery, we feel to write a letter to you before acquiring affirmation news will useless.
The factory house has already promise now two with in the week deliver goods.BE arrange round in"Yangtze River" shipment now, that settles to drive to your harbor at the beginning of next month.Once transporting a ship, we will immediately give or get an electric shock to tell you.
The loyal hope can't because of never even above-mentioned order square contact one matter with you square result in to you inconvenience, and hope that that goods can make you square completely satisfied...

Hi sir.
We haven't receive any apologizes for this order .We are till ake the the manufactory gave us the delivery time .It's useless send mail to you when we haven't got the the cfm delivery time.
The manufactory have been promised that they will delivery the goods in two weeks .I am working with the shipping agent "Changjiang ",they will said that the vessel will be arrived your port at the begain of the next month .I will noty you as soon as the delivery out.
I sincerely hope you will be satisfied the goods ,Also hope the didn't take any trouble for you .