I made my way out there
breathing in great (and) deep draughts
while walking slowly about, (and) still wearing my white cook's hat
我信步走去,一边深深呼吸着空气,一边慢慢地踱着步,头上仍戴着那顶白色的厨师帽。
句子用了很多表示伴随的短句,都是主谓同时省略的,用ing形式表示伴随。
我改下给你看看:
I walked out, and I was breathing in great, deep draughts, at that time, I was walking slowly about, and I was still wearing my white cook's hat.
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