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Paragraph Writing
The Hazards of Moviegoing
freewriting
I
really
find
it
annoying
to
go
see
movies
anymore.
Even
though
I
love
films,
traffic
to
Cinema Six is awful. I hate looking for a parking place, the lot isn
’
t big enough for the theaters
and other stores. You just keep driving to find a parking space and hoping someone will pull out
and no one else will pull in ahead of you. Then you don
’
t want there to be a long line and to wind
up in one of the first rows with this huge screen right in front of you. Then
I’
m in the theater with
the smell of popcorn all around. Sitting there selling it trying to ignore it and just wanting to pour
a
whole
bucket
of
popcorn
with
melted
butter
down
my
throat.
I
can
’
t
stop
thinking
about
the
chocolate bars either. I love the stuff but I don
’
t need it. The people who are there sometimes drive
me nuts. Talking and laughing, kids running around, packs of teens hollering, who can listen to the
movie? And I might run into my old boyfriend
–
the last thing I need. Also sitting through all the
previews and commercials. If I arrive late enough to miss that junk the movie may be selled out.
Revised draft
Although I love movies, I
’
ve found that there are drawbacks to moviegoing. One problem is
just the inconvenience of it all. To get to the theater, I have to drive for at least fifteen minutes, or
more if traffic is bad. It can take forever to find a parking spot, and then I have to walk across a
huge parking lot to the theater. There I encounter long lines, sold-out shows, and ever-increasing
prices. And I hate sitting with my feet stuck to the floor because of other people
’
s spilled snacks.
Another
problem
is
my
lack
of
self-control
at
the
theater.
I
often
stuff
myself
with
unhealthy
calorie-laden snacks. My choices might include a bucket of popcorn, a box of Milk Duds, a giant
soda, or all three. The worst problem is some of the other moviegoers. Kids run up and down the
aisle. Teenagers laugh and shout at the screen. People of all ages drop soda cups and popcorn tubs,
cough and burp, and talk to one another. All in all, I would rather stay home and wait to see the
latest
movie
hits
on
cable
TV
in
the
comfort
of
my
own
living
room.
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Essay Writing
First draft
Even though I love movie, my friends have stopped asking me to go. There are just too many
problems involved in going to the movies
There
are
no
small
theaters
anymore,
I
have
to
drive
fifteen
minutes
to
a
big
multiplex.
Because of a supermarket and restaurants, the parking lot is filled. I have to keep driving around to
find a space. Then I have to stand in a long line. Hoping that they do not run out of tickets. Finally,
I have to pay too much money for a ticket. Putting out that much money, I should not have to deal
with
a
floor
that
seems
coated
with
rubber
cement. By
the
end
of
a
movie,
my
shoes
are often
sealed to a mix of spilled soda, bubble gun, and other stuff.
The theater offers temptations in the form of snacks I really don
’
t need. Like most of us I
have to worry about weight gain. At home I do pretty well by simply watching what I keep in the
house and not buying stuff that is bad for me. I can make do with healthy snacks because there is
nothing
in
the
house. Going
to
the
theater
is
like
spending
my
evening
in
a
market
that
’
s
been
equipped with a movie screen and there are seats which are comfortable. I try to persuade myself
to just have a diet soda. The smell of popcorn soon overcomes me. My friends are as bad as I am.
Chocolate bars seem to jump into your hands, I am eating enormous mouthfuls of milk duds. By
the time I leave the theater I feel sick and tired of myself.
Some of the other moviegoers are the worst problem. There are teenagers who try to impress
their friends in one way or another. Little kids race up and down the aisles, giggling and laughing.
Adults act as if they
’
re watching the movie at home. They talk loudly about the ages of the stars
and give away the plot. Other people are dropping popcorn tubs or cups of crushed ice and soda
on the floor. Also coughing a lot and doing other stuff.
I decided one night that I was not going to be a moviegoer anymore. I joined a local video
store, and
I’
ll watch movies comfortable in my own living room.
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Revised draft
The Hazards of Moviegoing
I am a movie fanatic. My friends count on me to know movie trivia (who was the pigtailed
little
girl
in
E.T.:
The
Extra-terrestrial?
Drew
Barrymore)
and
to
remember
every
big
Oscar
awarded since I was in grade school (best picture 1994? Forrest Gump). My friends, though, have
stopped asking me if I want to go out to the movies. While I love movies as much as ever, the
inconvenience of going out, the temptations of the theater, and the behavior of some patrons are
reasons for me to wait and rent the video.
To begin with, I just don
’
t enjoy the general hassle of the evening. Since small local movie
theaters are a thing of the past, I have to drive for fifteen minutes to get to the nearest multiplex.
The parking lot is shared with several restaurants and s supermarket, so it
’
s always jammed. I have
to drive around at a snail
’
s pace until I spot another driver backing out. Then it
’
s time to stand in
an endless line, with the constant threat that tickets for the show I want will sell out. If we do get
tickets, the theater will be so crowded that I won
’
t be able to sit with my friends, or we
’
ll have to
sit in a front row gaping up at a giant screen. I have to shell out a ridiculous amount of money
–
up
to $8
–
for a ticket. That entitles me to sit while my shoes seal themselves to a sticky floor coated
with spilled soda, bubble gum, and crushed Raisinets.
Second, the theater offers tempting snacks that I really don
’
t need. Like most of us, I have to
battle an expanding waistline. At home I do pretty well by simply not buying stuff that is bad for
me. I can make do with snacks like celery and carrot sticks because there is no ice cream in the
freezer. Going to the theater, however, is like spending my evening in a Seven-Eleven that
’
s been
equipped with a movie screen and comfortable seats. As I try to persuade myself to just have a diet
Coke, the smell of fresh popcorn dripping with butter soon overcomes me. Chocolate bars the size
of
small
automobiles
seem
to
jump
into
my
hands.
I
risk
pulling
out
my
fillings
as
I
chew
enormous mouthfuls of Milk Duds. By the time I leave the theater, I feel disgusted with myself.
Many of the other patrons are even more of a problem than the concession stand. Little kids
race up and down the aisles, usually in giggling packs. Teenagers try to impress their friends by
talking back to the screen, whistling, and making what they consider to be hilarious noises. Adults
act as if they were at home in their own living room. They comment loudly on the ages of the stars
and reveal plot twists that are supposed to be a secret until the film
’
s end. And people of all ages
create distractions. They crinkle candy wrappers, stick gum on their seats, and drop popcorn tubs
or cups of crushed ice and soda on the floor. They also cough and burp, squirm endlessly in their
seats, file out for repeated trips to the rest rooms or concession stands, and elbow me out of the
armrest on either side of my seat.
After
arriving
home
from
the
movies
one
night,
I
decided
that
I
was
not
going
to
be
a
moviegoer
anymore.
I
was
tired
of
the
problems
involved
in
getting
to
the
theater,
resisting
unhealthy snacks, and dealing with the patrons. The next day, I arranged to have premium movie
channels installed as part of my cable TV service, and I also got a membership at my local video
store. I may now see movies a bit later than other people, but
I’
ll be more relaxed watching box
office hits in the comfort of my own living room
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