帮忙写一短篇英语作文，要求如下。

There is no wonder that it is a big conflication about whether young men should live with their parents, as some one tends to live in the same room with his dad, while others expects a room of his own. in my oponion, it is better for an individual to live indepently for the two reasons mentioned below. initially, living indepently means that one can have a better privacy. it is obviously that as people grow up they need more and more private space, right? in addition, i think that living alone can benefit one's finiancial habbit by planning and using his own money without extra help from parents. normally, people tends to be more flexible if he have an independent finiancial living style. these two reasons may explain why i want to have an independent living style

People have different opinions toward whether we should live with our parents. Some people are willing to live with their parents because parents can cook and do some housework for them. Some people want to live independently because they want more personal space. I think we should be more independent when we grow up. We can't depend on our parents forever, so we will be by ourselves sooner or later. If we have the financial income to support ourselves, we should live by ourselves. We will have different schedules than our parents', so it is important for us to have personal space. Besides, parents should also have their own lives.

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