想请专业人士帮我修改一下下面的这篇英语文章，看看这篇文章怎么样。可以的话麻烦帮我再加一个结尾。谢谢

首先，我不是专业人士。
其次，同楼上，你查了一些你不熟悉的单词放上去，显得比较生硬。如果你想用点看上去高端洋气上档次的单词，可以先学学他们的用法，和适用的环境。
最后，语法错误挺多的，我觉得你该补习下基础语法知识了，比如It may too much啥的，当然也可能是你的高端用法我不懂。
结尾么，你可以写：俗话说，青菜萝卜，各有所爱。Every man has his hobbyhorse。每种娱乐都有他的好处，我们都应该找到适合自己，并对自己成长有帮助的。

这段英文也不难，自己写吧。不同人写出来感觉都不一样的。
加油！

In our life, entertainment is very essential. Nomatter who you are, entertainment is needed..
as to the benefits of recreation ,there are too many on the list. for example -- listen to music. Rhythmic music can inspire the human spirit and make people excited, and the melodic music can get people feel calm, and become relaxed and happy.
There are many ways to recreation. Some people like stay in a quiet place. so they can listen to music, read books or grow flowers. some people like do sports, and most of women like shopping with their friends…….
I want to keep myself in the world of books and I think it may be the best way to relax . A good book can calms me down, and sometimes I even forget the time!I can learn a lot of things by read a good book , It is not only the things about good sentences, but also a world warms me up.
你这文章很多都是中式英语，改的太费劲了，我尽我所能帮你改了一下，可能还有一些不足之处，不过希望能帮到你！

我只能说 你是查了多少单词才写出来这个的？