帮我看看下面的中英文翻译有没有问题

猜楼主要的是英译：

Since 2010, we having been supplying high-end servo motors to various servo motor traders, mostly with metal casting.
We have a sophisticated CNC machine workshop, producing 5,000 to 10,000 sets of all-metal servos monthly.
Established in 2014, Shenzhen Gliding World Technology Co., Ltd. has been living up to its mission statement of delivering integrity in our products and services, providing innovative solutions to our trading partners and offering open communications among stackholders. Our corporate philosophy is providing the best service, by the best people, with the best technology.
We have our own product development department for designing all-metal high-end servos, mainly the coreless and brushless types.
We believe that customer satisfaction lies in three basic principles: quality, technology and after-sales services.
We look forward to working with you for all of your servos needs. Your success is also our success, and we know that.

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首先我不知道这个node到底是指什么？它有没有行为能力？因为你用了好几个行为动词check、find等。如果它没有行为能力，通常应该用被动语态。下文假定它有行为能力：
Each node should check the energy of its adjacent [虽然意思差不多，但感觉比neighboring好一些] nodes. If its energy was more than that of any one of its adjacent nodes, one vote would be added to it (initial value was 0). The rest messages should be checked in the same way. As a consequence, each node would get a certain number of votes.
as a consequence在此处强调按上述方式做完那些checking之后的结果。
如果node没有行为能力，建议：
The energy of each node should be checked. If the energy of one node was more than that of any one of the adjacent nodes, one vote would be added to it (initial value was 0). The rest messages should be checked in the same way. As a consequence, each node would be added with a certain number of votes.

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