您好，您能帮我看一个英语文章吗？帮我改一下！谢谢！

2024-12-16 23:44:06

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回答1：

对我来说最大的困难和挑战,我认为这是当我成为了我们学校的叙述者学校历史,因为学校历史旁白是在学校开放日,介绍学校的历史教师,学生,和父母。对我来说,这不是一个简单的事情,首先,我需要记住学校的历史,熟悉学校的景观,并使用清晰和容易理解的方式来介绍。其次,每一个是陌生人,我希望他们可以有一个好的理解我和我的学校,所以我需要很大的勇气和一颗真诚的心,微笑着介绍一个美丽的学校。当我解释它,我遇到了很多的小问题,如压力,我的脸非常僵硬,我的声音沙哑,耳朵嗡嗡作响,突然我的头突然忘记了单词,这让我也很尴尬。但是我给我的鼓励燃料,自我调节,我越来越自信,慢慢地我不再紧张,微笑在我的脸上开始出现。我很高兴,因为一个一个的说谢谢我,我也笑了笑,这让我感到非常自豪。
希望能帮到你，望采纳，谢谢。

回答2：

.............太多错误了，不骗你，你自己认真检查一遍，而且不要老是for me，你想表达这种意思可以用其他的词，比如In my mind ，as for me，in terms of等
For me the greatest difficulties and challenges I think that was when I became the narrator school history of our school
【For me the greatest difficulties and challenges was becoming the history narrator of our school】
because school history narrator is to be at the school open day ,to introduce the history of the school to the teachers, students, and parents.
【 because to be a school history narrator means to introduce the school history to the teachers, students, and parents on the opening ceremony .】
For me it is not a simple thing, 【it is not easy for me】
first of all ,I need to remember the school's history, 【to be】 familiar with the school's landscape, and use clear and understandable way to introduce【them】.
Secondly, every one is【most of them are】 strangers, I hope they can have a good understanding to 【of】me and my school, so I need a lot of courage【courages】, smiling with a sincere heart to introduce a 【this】beautiful school.
When I explain it, I met a lot of small problems, such as stress, my face very stiff【stiffness of my face】, my voice suddenly hoarse 【hoarse voice】, ear buzzing, my head suddenly forgot the words【a sudden loss of my memory for the words】, it【these】 makes 【make】me also very embarrassed.
But I give my encouraging fuel【没这种表达】, With the self-adjustment, I getting 【突然冒出分词 I was getting 】more and more confident, and slowly I am no longer nervous ,smile began to appear on my face. I am very happy, because every one of them to say thank you to me and I smiled back, it makes me feel very proud.

不改了，文章本来也应该用过去时，这里面中式英语太多，建议以后不要自己造句子，先学些好词好句，学些常见表达，在确保没有错误的情况下再追求文采。

回答3：

楼主你文章里有很多的语法问题，很多单词是中国式英文，外国人是看不懂的。总体的文章内容不错。我把一些东西改了下，你自己读读看，是不是好一些。

For me the greatest challenge is when I become the narrator of school history for my school. School history narrator is to be at the school open day , it is introducing the history of the to the school teachers, students, and parents. It is not a simple thing, first of all ,I need to remember the school's history, be familiar with the school's landscape, and use clear and understandable way to introduce it to others. Secondly, everyone there are strangers, I hope they can have a good impression to me and my school. Which I need a lot of courage all time, smiling with a sincere heart to introduce this beautiful school. When I was explaining it, I met a lot of problems, such as stress, my face was stiff, my voice suddenly hoarse, ear buzzing, my head suddenly went blank, It was an embarrassement. But as I self-adjustment, I got more and more confident, I was no longer nervous ,a smile began to appear on my face. I am very happy, because every one of them said thank you to me and I smiled back, it maked me feel very proud.

回答4：

For me the greatest difficulties and challenges， I think， is to become the school history narrator school of our school, because a school history narrator has to introduce the history of the school to the teachers, students, and parents at the school open day. For me it is not a simple thing.First of all,I need to remember the school's history, get familiar with the school's landscape, and introduce them in a clear and understanding way. Secondly, every one is a stranger. I hope they can have a good understanding of my school and me. So I need a lot of courage, smiling with a sincere heart to introduce a beautiful school. When I explain it, I will meet a lot of small problems, such as stress, my stiff face, which will make me very embarrassed. But I give my encouraging fuel. With the self-adjustment, I am getting more and more confident, and slowly I am no longer nervous. Smile begins to appear on my face. I am very happy, because every one of them says thank you to me and I smile back, which makes me feel very proud.

回答5：

For me the greatest difficulties and challenges, I think that was when I became the narrator, school history of our school, because school history narrator is to be at the school open day, to introduce the history of the school to the teachers, students, and parents. For me, it is not a simple thing.
First of all, I need to remember the school's history, familiar with the school's landscape, and use clear and understandable way to introduce.
Secondly, everyone is strangers; I hope they can have a good understanding to me and my school, so I need a lot of courage, smiling with a sincere heart to introduce a beautiful school. When I explain it, I met a lot of small problems, such as stress, my face very stiff, my voice suddenly hoarse, ear buzzing, my head suddenly forgot the words, and it makes me also very embarrassed. But I give my encouraging fuel, with the self-adjustment, I getting more and more confident, and slowly, I am no longer nervous, smile began to appear on my face. I am very happy, because every one of them to say thanks you, to me and I smiled back, it makes me feel very proud.

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