你会把以下句子翻译成英语吗？

I am xxx. I am the squadron leader in my school, xxx in Shanghai. For several years, I was elected the most entusiastic and best pioneer.
I am studious and hardworking and an academic achiever. Besides that, I am also optimistic, lively and lovely.
I excel at moral, intellectual, physical, aesthetic, labor and other aspects. I am a good example for the students, a good partner, and a good assistant for teachers.
你是要写来应征吗？我可以写得更好。这只是翻译你的话，我个人认为不够说服力。

Personal introduction
I am xxx, xxxxx young pioneers in Shanghai squadron leader, for several years the school was named outstanding young pioneers. I am studious, academic achievers, optimistic, hobbies, lively and lovely, is a moral, intellectual, physical, aesthetic, labor and other aspects have shown excellent student, is a good example for the students a good partner, teacher a good assistant.

Personal introduction I am XXX, is the young pioneers of the xxxxx primary school in Shanghai City captain, for several years, the school was named outstanding young pioneers. I work hard, excellent in character and learning, optimistic, the hobby is widespread, lively and lovely, is a in every virtue, wisdom, body, beauty, etc. are outstanding students, is a good example for the students good partner, teacher's good assistant.