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Work hard at school
Every morning I go to school by bike. I have 7 lessons a day. I learn seven subjects, such as English, Chinese, Maths,Geography, History, Physical Education and so on. All the teachers in our school work very hard. They do their best to help us with our studies. We are busy having lessons in the morning.At noon, we can borrow different kinds of books from the library. Sometimes we are allowed to step into the E-reading room. We can surf the net for some useful information. During the PE lesson, many boys like to play ball games while we girls like to play badminton or to practise dancing in the gym.
My school life is busy but interesting.

改一下就好了！

Jim and Tom are twin brother.They are students in No.1 Moddle School.They are 13 years old.There are in the same class.They have a nice room.There are two beds and a desk in it.Jim and Tom like white best of all.So you can see a lot of white things in the room.They like soccer a lot.They can play it well.They think it's interesting and it can make them healthy.But they don't like backetball.They think it's difficult.On weekwnd,they don't go to school.They often go to movies.They like different kinds of movies.They want to join the movie club.So they can get cheaper tickets.At school,they are good students.They work hard at thier subjects。At home,they are good chidren.They often help thier parents with housework.All the people around like them.