看一下这篇英语作文有那些语法错误容易被扣分？

同学，你好！很高兴为你修改这篇小作文。

It is clear that I love English.Needless to say,I often talk with others in English (communicate with others in English).There are two main reasons for interviewing English guide.On one hand,it is obvious that I often talk with my friends and my net-pals.On the other hand,no one can deny that I love talking in Engliswith other people.What's more,I am a member of  the  city.It goes without saying that I should recognise many things about the culture of this city.

I hope you will agree with me.

• 希望对你有所帮助。学习进步、快乐！

needless to say 可以换做there is no doulbt that。
use english talking 换做ues english to talk更好
最后一句不要加to

1.use english to talk. 2.字母大小写问题 3.My net-pen friends. 4.i hope you agree with me.大概看到这些