The detection of buried pipeline and its developing history were introduced, including their functionalities, structures and specifications. The limitations and current problems for the conventional methods were compared and discussed. A novel automatic vehicle was designed to examine the pipeline and assure the quality to achieve high efficiency, high convenience, and highly personalized.
作为一个英文的摘要,内容上还不够,首先不知道你这篇论文的主要论点是什么,到底写这篇论文是为了对比一下各种检测装置介绍现状,还是解决目前面临问题?别人看了只觉得论文中有各种介绍,但到底分析了什么,讨论出什么都不明确。还有就是结论说的还不够,至少得包含2-3点结论才行。
可以以The aim of this paper is to... 开头,然后为了实现这个aim,分了几步做到的,每步各得到什么结论,收集了这些数据和结论后,认为应该怎样,最后给个结论
埋地管道的检测,介绍了其发展历史,包括他们的功能、结构和规范。当前问题的限制和对传统的方法进行了比较和讨论。小说设计了一个自动车辆检查管道和保证质量达到高效率、高便利,和高度个性化的。
这个应该是介绍一种装置,介绍它的现状、局限、发展方向。