高分急求几句翻译（最佳答案再追加50分）

看了其他几篇,放word里都会显示很多错误.摘要不仅要简洁,主语也要整齐,不然会很繁琐.我这篇LZ看看吧,我觉得这样不错了.
Nowadays, mobile phone has almost become a necessity for our human’s daily life. Several authoritative surveys indicate that in China, a huge second-hand mobile phone market has been gradually taking shape.
With a series of demonstration and investigation, this article analyzes today's second-hand mobile phone market from these four aspects: demand conditions, existing problems, potential benefit and direction for future development. Based on current network technique, this paper also tends to make out a reasonable, legitimate and green system for the recycling and sales of the second-hand mobile phone.
A comprehensive dissertation will be carried from the following angles: the feasibility of the system, main target users, interface and the achievement of functions, basic operation flow, requirements for software and hardware, the maintenance in later period and possible shortages and dangers.
During the dissertation, the analysis of system feasibility will involve these three parts: technology exploration, labor force and financial resources, and working popularization, While the system design section will be demonstrated with normative operation flow and data flow charts, to present a more vivid image of the system’s operating flow to the readers.

ps:对于贝尔奥特若这位不知是马甲还是路人甲的发言我简直无语,yatou3509的翻译有很多错误,我是看过的.
你要说我结合谁谁谁的我也懒得理你,语法错误那么多,要给我结合我还得再斟酌一下要不要采用呢.正确率高和语言编辑得流畅才是正道.这是回答问题,不是来争风的.

Now the society, the handset nearly has become the essential item which the people live. Investigates according to several authorities indicated that in our country, a huge two handset market already gradually formed. This article will unify a series of real diagnosis investigation and study, to the nowadays two handset market's demand condition, the existence question, hides the benefit and development direction these four aspects carries on the analysis. And unifies the existing networking, seizes the body for this market to make to order one reasonable, legitimate, the green second-hand handset recycling and two sales systems. The article from system's feasibility, the main user object, the connection and the function will realize, the movement operation's basic flow, will move the software and hardware environment request which will need, later period will maintain the insufficiency which and dangerous these angles as well as will possibly exist carries on the comprehensive elaboration. And, system's feasibility analysis will involve the development technology, the manpower fund, the movement to promote these three aspects. But system design's part, will supplement the standard the service flow chart and the data flow chart, enables reporting technology system's operation flow to present vividly in front of the reader.

Today's society, cell phones have become almost a necessity for daily life. According to several authoritative survey shows that in China, a huge two mobile phone market has been gradually taking shape. This paper will combine a series of empirical research, to today's two mobile phone market demand conditions, the existing problems, the hidden interests and development of these four areas for analysis. Combined with the existing network technology, the market who wins build a reasonable and legitimate, green recycling second-hand mobile phone sales and the secondary system. The article will be the feasibility of the main targets of users, the interface and functions to achieve, the basic operation of running processes and operating the necessary software and hardware environmental requirements, the latter part of the maintenance, and there may be inadequate and dangerous these to conduct a comprehensive perspective Expositions. Among them, the feasibility analysis will involve the development of technology, human resources, promotion of running these three areas. The system design part, will be attached to regulate the business flow chart and data flow chart, so that the operation of the system can process the image presented in more readers.

Nowadays, mobile has become a necessity for human daily life. According to several authoritative survey, they show that in China, a huge second-hand mobile phone market has been gradually taking shape. This paper will combine a series of empirical research, to analyze today's second-hand phone market from these four sections: demand conditions, the existing problems, the hidden benefit and development. Combined with the existing network technology, to tailor build a reasonable, legitimate and green recycling second-hand mobile phone sales and secondary sales system. The article through the feasibility of the main targets of users, the interface and functions to achieve, the basic operation of running processes and operating the necessary software and hardware environmental requirements, later period of the maintenance, and there may be inadequate and dangerous such angles to cope with. Among them, the feasibility analysis will involve the development of technology, human resources, promotion of running these three sections. The system design part, will be attached normative business flow chart and data flow chart so that the operation of the system can process the image presented in readers.

The mobile phone has already become a daily necessity in modern society. According to some authoritative surveys, a large market of second-hand mobile phones has emerged gradually in China. With a series of demonstration and investigation, this paper analyses four aspects of the recent second-hand mobile phone market: demand and supply, existing problems, potential benefits, and direction for future development. Based on the current network technique, the paper tends to make out a reasonable, legal and environmental protecting system for the second-hand mobile phones’ recycling and distribution. A comprehensive discussion will be carried from the following angles: system feasibility, main customers, implementation of interface and function, basic operation flow, requirements for software and hardware, after sale maintenance, possible shortages and dangers. During the discussion, the analysis of system feasibility is related to three elements: exploration technology, manpower and financial resources, and working popularization. While the system design part will be demonstrated with normative operation flow and data flow charts, presenting a more vivid image of the system’s operating flow to the readers.

又是论文摘要么。。。呃，最怕看到一连串的四字词了。
The mobile phone has already become a daily necessity in modern society. According to some authoritative surveys, a large market of second-hand mobile phones has emerged gradually in China. With a series of demonstration and investigation, this paper analyses four aspects of the recent second-hand mobile phone market: demand and supply, existing problems, potential benefits, and direction for future development. Based on the current network technique, the paper tends to make out a reasonable, legal and environmental protecting system for the second-hand mobile phones’ recycling and distribution. A comprehensive discussion will be carried from the following angles: system feasibility, main customers, implementation of interface and function, basic operation flow, requirements for software and hardware, after sale maintenance, possible shortages and dangers. During the discussion, the analysis of system feasibility is related to three elements: exploration technology, manpower and financial resources, and working popularization. While the system design part will be demonstrated with normative operation flow and data flow charts, presenting a more vivid image of the system’s operating flow to the readers.

终于翻完了，呼。还好这个东东没多少专业术语。有些字词是查的准也计算机字典，应该没得错。至于你那些一大串四字词的句子，基本保留了其形式。因为论文摘要有其特殊要求：简练。要是和偶们做翻译作业时一样拆句不知道要拆成几句，太啰嗦了。所以偶也尽量用简单的句式，能直接用词组最好（翻技术文件得出的教训啊！）。你看看意思有没有出入，呵呵