这里我用check(核对 )代替了confirm,是否语气会婉转些 而且 right or not就不需要了
address代替了recipient‘s info你看如何。
Would you please check your address for we wiil send you the original documents via DHL asap。
就说:
Please kindly double check the following recipient's information, after your confirmation we'll send the original documents to you(him/her) by DHL accordingly.