谁能帮我修改一下这篇文章啊

2025-01-07 22:35:00

推荐回答（3个）

回答1：

可以 I think it because的吗？不是要I think it's because
live in the high buildings
through the buildings 可能放在 see cities characteristics后面更地道
other 换成 another
are communication 换成 are communicating ，或许用现在完成时更好？？？
they influence each other
different region people 表达有点怪？
lack 前面不要用are
copy 变copies
city or countries 用复数
最好在最后一段前加转折词像 however啊，though啊什么的，
as soon as possible?
楼主写得很不错，我就仅供参考意见。

回答2：

　　With the rapid development of cities, cities tourism industry is growing fast. However, the city appearance gradually converging cause city’s characteristic losing.
In the past, people go to different places see different views, but now they can see more similarities. What are the causes of this phenomenon?
On the one hand，I think it because the building has extensive sex now. Most of people live in the high building and the ancient buildings being demolished，so you can not through the buildings see cities characteristics.
On the other hand, I think the lifestyle is other reason. With the development of transportation、 communication and the internet，people of different countries ，regions are communication more and more frequently. Their influence each other, so, one by one, lifestyle is become similar. Another example is immigration，because different region people gather together may influence each other.
More reasons：may be the city construction are lack creativity；the government are Lack of thinking just copy other city or country and so on.
I don’t think the advantages outweigh disadvantages，but I want to say we should frankly face it and create city features as far as possible

回答3：

不会

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