一篇关于伦敦之游的英语作文

To wander London （漫步伦敦）
With ongoing development of Chinese market economy,Chinese tourism has becoming more sophisticated day by day.travelling in Europe is popular and in fashion now .As we known,London is internation financial center ,in order to edifying experience and improve my abilities of using English,last summer ,I travelled with my best friend Stephanie by airplane aim to London .
When we arrived in London ,we were attracted by it prosperous appearance—on flank of the street cars come and go in an endless flow are bustling commercial bank and row upon row corpornation(在车辆川流不息的道路两侧商业银行门庭若市大公司鳞次栉比，逻辑有点乱),white collar armed with brief case on the way of negotiation hastily,I know this is the life of my expectation.
I make up mine mind,working hard on the last two years in my senior high school and get high score to pass college entrance examination ,aim at becoming an architect,for grand socialism with Chinese characteristics contribute my hot blood and life.

To wander London （漫步伦敦）
With ongoing development of Chinese market economy,Chinese tourism has becoming more sophisticated day by day.travelling in Europe is popular and in fashion now .As we known,London is internation financial center ,in order to edifying experience and improve my abilities of using English,last summer ,I travelled with my best friend Stephanie by airplane aim to London .
When we arrived in London ,we were attracted by it prosperous appearance—on flank of the street cars come and go in an endless flow are bustling commercial bank and row upon row corpornation(在车辆川流不息的道路两侧商业银行门庭若市大公司鳞次栉比，逻辑有点乱),white collar armed with brief case on the way of negotiation hastily,I know this is the life of my expectation.
I make up mine mind,working hard on the last two years in my senior high school and get high score to pass college entrance examination ,aim at becoming an architect,for grand socialism with Chinese characteristics contribute my hot blood and life. (最后一段原汁原味中国国情)。

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