请大家帮我看看有没有语法错误，顺便修改一下。谢谢大家

应该是过去式吧！
Beth is of...应该改为Beth is in
but hers intelligent 应该改为her intelligence
Finally Darcy isn’t pride at all(pride应该改为proud)
They’re love each other改为They love each other

错了不怪我，我只是快初三的，希望可以帮到你

It's a story between Darcy, a rich and proud young man, and Elizabeth Bennett, a beautiful and smart lady. Darcy's pride makes him look down upon the people who are in a lower social class. Beth is in a lower class than Darcy. But her intelligence attracts Darcy. Later Darcy falls in love with Beth. Because of Wickham's accusations of Darcy, Beth has prejudice against Darcy. So she refuses Darcy's love. Finally Darcy isn't proud at all and Beth knows Wickham is a cheater. Since then, they love each other. (仅供参考，不当之处，敬请批评指正）