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My name is Lin Tao, I am a middle school student,I think playing computer games too much has a lot of disadventages.Now computer games is popular among students.But some students play computer games all day and forget to do their homework, They even don't go to school.In addition,playing computer games takes a lot of money,some often ask their parents for money,some often borrow money from their classmates, and some even theal money from their classmates.These all make them can't study normally.Playing too much computer games benefits to the owners of the web safe,but it isn't good for our study and health,I hope our government can take actions to prevent it.

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My name is Lin Tao, I am a secondary school student. I think playing electronic games has lots of disadvantages. Electronic games are now pretty popular among students, some students play them all day and don't finish their homewords, and even skip lessons! Furthermore, playing these games are expansive. Some student often ask their parents for money, some borrow money from their friends. Some even steal money! All these things make students cannot study as usual. Too much electronic games only benefit the shop owners while damaging students both physically and academically. We hope the government takes actions to deal with the situation.

my name is lintao,i'm a high school student.i think it has many bad points on playing computer games.nowadays,computer games are very popular in high schools.some students play them all day long,they don't do their homework or even play truent.playing computer games will cost lots of money,some of the students ask their parents for money,some of them have to borrow money from their classmates,what's more,some students steal people for money.all these make them can't concentrate on studying.playing those games will make the hosts get more money,but it's not good for our health and study.we all hope the government can take measures to control the situation.

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