请问哪位英语达人能帮我修改一下本人写的小文？不胜感激！

many traditional festival
Africa style
the most important’ s festival
knock the drum
all the people enter
dance happily until a week
it become
In August,20th
Here had many culture handicraft
such us
in Togo local
some special mask
interesting sculpture
初一的孩子我会觉得您创造性大有可为，学习潜力十足，中式英语不可怕
高中生甚至大学生，就很可怕啊，单复，倒装，形容词所有格混乱使用，朋友加油。

festival应该是复数
such as
the most important festival 没有's
all the people take in part of it好一些吧
敲鼓应该用beat这个动词
应该是for a week
now it has become...用完成时
应该是there they had many cultural handicrafts.
such as the carpet of local Togo,some special masks and interesting sculptures