英语短文改错 在线等

A man got on a train and (1sit) beside a woman. The woman was more than thirty (2year) old. Soon they began talking to (3every) other.He said to her,"Do you have a family""Yes,I have one son"the woman replied (4to)."(Oh,really?"said the man."DoeS he smoke?""No,"the (5man) answered,"That 'S good"The man was glad to say,"I don't smoke,too,smoking is bad for your (6healthy).And does your son often fight with other?"

1.sit--sat
2.year--years
3.every--each
4.to删去
5.man--woman
6.healthy--health

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应该改成…………………………
A man got on a train and sat beside a woman. The woman was more than thirty years old. Soon they began to talk toeach other.He said to her,"Do you have a family""Yes,I have one soon"the woman answered."Oh,really?"said the man."DoeS he smoke?""No,"the man answered,"That 's good"The man was glad to say,"I don't smoke,either,smoking is bad for your health.And does your son often fight with others?"
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A man got on a train and sat beside a woman. The woman was more than thirty years old. Soon they began to talk toeach other.He said to her,"Do you have a family""Yes,I have one soon"the woman answered."Oh,really?"said the man."DoeS he smoke?""No,"the man answered,"That 's good"The man was glad to say,"I don't smoke,either,smoking is bad for your health.And does your son often fight with others?"