1.我觉得不要用现在进行时,用完成时比较好。意思是你写下了关于学校条例的改变。To reply to you, I have written down some changes of our school rules。
2.we can't even choose our own food at all.这样比较顺些。
3.用there be比较好。还有就是单复数错误,见下面:There really were some limites, although we all knew they were good for us.
5.smile at看着...微笑; 一笑置之
6.food的复数形式就是原型,应该是food in/of different style
7.你想表达什么意思?如果是:你能想象它多么令人激动么?应该是Can you imagine how exciting it is?
8.这句写的太罗嗦。I had nothing interested in就可以了。
9. 这句不知道你想表达什么意思?
12.不知道你想表达什么意思?
13.foodsteps 可数
14.意思表达上有些不准确,不知道你想表达什么意思。
1,to reply you目的状语最好放在句末,不过这样也没错,只是有点别扭。
2,句意成了“我们不能选择自己的食物”,可以改成“We can't even choose what to eat“会好点
3,limit复数直接加s,
there is句型,用错了
know 现在知道
整句话都是不对的!表意不明。
改成Though I know it's good for us,I think it's really a limit.
4,缺少系动词,改成
Now the rules are changed a lot already.
5,该是smile to ,如果你要表达嘲笑应该是laugh at
6,真奇怪,你要表达什么?
用different tastes 较好
7,如果是”发生了让人兴奋的事“
Can you imagine how excited the thing is?
如果是修饰发生的事情应该用形容词的excited
8,用现在时更好啊。可以是I have nothing interested in. 不过你的也没错,就是时态有问题。
9,从没听过这种表达~~
10,正确,但如果是把with nobody else 改成alone不是更好吗
11,语法正确,只是有点别扭,表达过于中文化
12,显然不合适。语气不对阿 为什么不用ask for
13,错了 首先不用加the
然后…………relaxed
footsteps
14,tasty是味觉上的!~~~这里是用的过去式,I said to myself.
好累啊!!!!不过老师会那么严的批吗??人多的话,有些可以混过去的。
你学过英语吗?smile at sth你是要说取笑别人吗?那应该是laugh at sb或是play trick on