期中考试英语作文,帮我看看有没语法错误~~谢

2025-01-24 17:31:37
推荐回答(3个)
回答1:

1.我觉得不要用现在进行时,用完成时比较好。意思是你写下了关于学校条例的改变。To reply to you, I have written down some changes of our school rules。
2.we can't even choose our own food at all.这样比较顺些。
3.用there be比较好。还有就是单复数错误,见下面:There really were some limites, although we all knew they were good for us.
5.smile at看着...微笑; 一笑置之
6.food的复数形式就是原型,应该是food in/of different style
7.你想表达什么意思?如果是:你能想象它多么令人激动么?应该是Can you imagine how exciting it is?
8.这句写的太罗嗦。I had nothing interested in就可以了。
9. 这句不知道你想表达什么意思?
12.不知道你想表达什么意思?
13.foodsteps 可数
14.意思表达上有些不准确,不知道你想表达什么意思。

回答2:

1,to reply you目的状语最好放在句末,不过这样也没错,只是有点别扭。
2,句意成了“我们不能选择自己的食物”,可以改成“We can't even choose what to eat“会好点
3,limit复数直接加s,
there is句型,用错了
know 现在知道
整句话都是不对的!表意不明。
改成Though I know it's good for us,I think it's really a limit.
4,缺少系动词,改成
Now the rules are changed a lot already.
5,该是smile to ,如果你要表达嘲笑应该是laugh at
6,真奇怪,你要表达什么?
用different tastes 较好
7,如果是”发生了让人兴奋的事“
Can you imagine how excited the thing is?
如果是修饰发生的事情应该用形容词的excited
8,用现在时更好啊。可以是I have nothing interested in. 不过你的也没错,就是时态有问题。
9,从没听过这种表达~~
10,正确,但如果是把with nobody else 改成alone不是更好吗
11,语法正确,只是有点别扭,表达过于中文化
12,显然不合适。语气不对阿 为什么不用ask for
13,错了 首先不用加the
然后…………relaxed
footsteps
14,tasty是味觉上的!~~~这里是用的过去式,I said to myself.

好累啊!!!!不过老师会那么严的批吗??人多的话,有些可以混过去的。

回答3:

你学过英语吗?smile at sth你是要说取笑别人吗?那应该是laugh at sb或是play trick on