2011年12月英语四级作文

这样应该不算走题，但是只要你写得好，然后没有语法错误的话，字写好一点，前后稍微句式稍微优美一点，那样的话分数应该不会低的，我就是吃了这个亏，所以四级就没有过。现在想想都哈可惜啊！！！！！望建议对你有所帮助！！！

我也是替网友写了这篇作文：Where There Is a Will There Is a Way
As we all know, we must try our best if we want succeeded. Thus, a strong will is definitely needed. In other words, a man who has strong will is much easier to achieve the success. The followings is two reasons on this.
On one hand, only having a strong will can you accomplish your great missions(使命）.Firstly, the man who has a strong will usually shows huge power and strength, for example ,Rome's Caesar emperors ever said," I come, I see, I conquer!", after that, he become a hero .What's more, it's the strong will that promote the fortune and dreams. Because people are likely to take some effective actions if they'll own strong will.
On the other hand, once you don't pay necessary efforts , you are impossibly successful and couldn't be a person who has a high-profile. So do we students, if we yield ourselves up and don't work hard, we're to suffer failure.感觉题目没要求写出两种观点，但是写成两种观点也无妨，会扣1~2分。能大概得11分吧，按15分算。

顺便说一下，我现在学的ABC天卞欧美外教英语的老师和我提到，其实要掌握好英语很简单的 坚持具有适宜的学习空间跟熟练口语对象，重点就是老师教学经验 东南亚口音重 一定要找欧美籍 发音纯正非常重要，保持天天口语练习 一对一家教式辅导才可以有非常.好.的学习成效..课后仍要重听课堂音频 好巩固知识点..不过实在没有练习对象的话 那么就到可可或爱思取得课外学习资料练习 多说多练短时间口语就提升起来 学习成效肯定会达成目标的 Noting Succeeds Winthout a Strong Will 就这个我考了

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