外贸翻译~~~~~老外推广给我的产品，我要回复给他的。。。。 重赏哦~~~~~~~

Hello!
After a research of one month, our company realised the product is not quite competitive in China market, no matter on price or product models. Since there are many similar products in our domestic market, and the average price is lower than your company's, we are afraid that we cannot promote your product in China market right now.
Hopefully, we can have opportunity to cooperate in future. We appreciate your help and support all along.

您好，通常外贸邮件的语言比较简洁明了，就事论事，只要得体就好。
以上译文供您参考，希望对您有所帮助。

Dear xxx,
We have to point out that the production was not competitive in China market, neither unit price or style. We can't promote it well, since the customers can find similar production by lower price easily.
We made above conclusion after a month marketing investigation.
Wish cooperate with you next time, and thank your for your long time supporting.
Best Regards,
xxx

我的经验是，给老外写邮件，一定要把重要的信息写在最前面，不要弄太多的铺垫。

Dear ***,
Have a good day!
After a month of marketing investigation,I thank our company don't have confidence of this product in China market,such as price or items.
Since a variety of similar products in this market and these price is lower than yours,so we afraid that it's not catch on China market.
Hopefully, we can have opportunity to cooperate in future.Thanks!
Best Rehards
***

Dear***,
How are you today？
After one month of marketing investigation,we doesn't have confidence in this product,we don't think it is competitive in China,either its price or its style.As you know,there are many kinds of similar kinds of products in our domestic market,their price is much lower than yours,we are not able to promote it in China.
Thanks for all your help,wish we can look for another chance to cooperate with each other in the near future！