第一段非常完美，你应该是英语课代表吧！第二段要稍微修改一下，有些句子结构需要完善：The biggest change in my life is that i am more outgoing than i used to be. This is also the most important change, I think. Now i have joined the music club and i enjoy listening to music. in the club, i make a lot of friends who are very funny and outgoing. We often have a good time together.
wasn't brave enough 第二段注意过去时态
另外你字挺好看的！
字写得好好 赞\(≧▽≦)/
好工整哦
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不错嘛 都会英语写作文了 可惜我一个都看不懂
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