请帮忙翻译成英文！！

good sir :
Excuse me sir,I'm a student will go to your country to study.fortunately，l already get a interview visa on 24th AUG 2011,now four weeks passed,i didn't get any infotmation for this visa,would you please tell me if my visa is come down,my school will begin on 4th OCT,I'm hungery to start my study in your cuntry,hope i could get my visa from you as soon as possible,thanks a lot!

your sincerly xxxxxx

Hello I am on August 24, 2011 signed to now face around more time I want to ask my visa down not because my school is will school begins October 4 by I compare worry hope can help me as soon as possible the embassy approved down thank you

嗯，很乐意帮你一把~！

【人工翻译】
Hello. I have applied for a interview visa on 24th August of 2011. In fact, four weeks have passed whereas no rely for me. Our university will begin the new semester on 4th October, that's why i eager to be given the approve permission quickly. thks

O(∩_∩)O哈哈~，人工翻译有点慢，可能排在后面了，记得采纳哟~！

Hi, I am on August 24, 2011 surface check and now has more than four weeks time, and I would like to ask my visa was not because my school is October 4 semester I am more worried want Embassy approved it as soon as possible to help me thank you

Hello I am a 24 August 2011 the surface has now been signed by more than four weeks time I would like to ask my visa with no down because my school is opening on October 4 will more and more anxious as I hope Ambassador House approval as soon as possible to help me down thank you