一道英语题 短文改错 共有10处错误 急.......

The day before the speech contest English teacher talked to me .She said that she and my (schoolmates) all wished me (a) success, but it didn't matter (whether) i would win or not.When i was on the stage the next day, i felt so nervous (that) i shook like a leaf.There were so many people present !Suddenly,i caught （去掉a) sight of my English teacher in the crowd. She was smiling (and) nodding at me. I recalled her words and calmed down. I did a good job and( won) the first prize. Now my picture and the prize (are) hanging in the library. Whenever i see them i will (always) think of my English teacher. 还有一个找不出来了，如果你老师讲了答案后，记得发给我看看哟~！互勉！

to改为with， schoolmates, that改为whether, the去掉， as 改为that, but改为and, of改为on, is改为are, hanging 后面加on, often去掉
希望大部分是正确的！

The day before the speech contest English teacher talked to me .She said that she and my (schoolmates) all wished me (a) success, but it didn't matter (whether) i would win or not.When i was on the stage the next day, i felt so nervous (that) i shook like a leaf.There were so many people present !Suddenly,i caught （去掉a) sight of my English teacher in the crowd（s）. She was smiling (and) nodding at me. I recalled her words and calmed down. I did a good job and( won) the first prize. Now my picture and the prize (are) hanging in the library. Whenever i see them i will (always) think of my English teacher.