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写了一篇小短文，是关于金在中的。英文。老师布置的。发出来希望英语很好的帮忙改改。

2024-12-30 04:55:45

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回答1：

HERO is a man,A real man
He was born in seoul,south korea ,in 1986.He is a singer,my favorite singer.
When he was 17.he has his debut as a member of TVXQ until 2009.
Now he is a member of JYJ.He is brave and persistence.He has a beautiful voice.
I love HERO so much that I can't stop paying close attention to him.
I'll love him and love him in whatever the band ofTVXQ or JYJ.

回答2：

HERO is a man,A real man
He was born in seoul,south korea ,in 1986.He is a singer,my favorite singer.
When he was 17.he has his debut as a member of TVXQ until 2009.
Now he is a member of JYJ.He is brave and persistence.He has beautiful voice.
I love HERO so much that I can't stop paying close attention to him.
Love him and love him in whatever the band ofTVXQ or JYJ.
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回答3：

I also love TVXQ~~~！！！还可以加：It Is he that tells me what is music and what is beautiful!

回答4：

英语不好

写了一篇小短文，是关于金在中的。 英文。 老师布置的。 发出来 希望英语很好的帮忙改改。

写了一篇小短文，是关于金在中的。英文。老师布置的。发出来希望英语很好的帮忙改改。