英语短文改错 明天就要 大家帮忙啊 一共10处错 谢谢啊

1. when it is comes 中去掉is
2. much to saying中的saying改成say
3. quarreled 改成quarrel
4.about if i could 中的if改成whether
5. strong 改成strongly
6. only when I try my best改成only when I had tried my best
7. be able to 改成can,另外把can放在I的前面
8. playing football not only. build up my strength and makes me full of energy evergy every day. 改成Not only do playing football build up my strength, but also make me full of energy every day.
9. some advices 改成some advice
10. allow me play 改成allow me to play

希望能帮到你哦~

第一处错误：“when it is comes to football .”将“is”去掉。
第二处错误：“I always have much to saying。”把“saying”改成“say”。
第三处错误：“Recently I often quarreled with my mother ”把“quarreled”改成“quarrel”.
第四处错误：“ if i could play football with my classmates at weekends.”把“if”改成“whether”。
第五处错误：“My mother holds the view strong ”把“strong”改为“strongly”。
第六处错误：“ I should devote all my spare time to study all the subjects well.”把“study”改为“studying”.
第七处错误：“In her opinion only when I try my best to study I be able to admitted to an university. ”在I前添加“can”.
第八处错误：“playing football not only. build up my strength ”把“build”改成“builds”。
第九处错误：“and makes me full of energy evergy every day.”把“and”改为“but also”。
第十处错误：“allow me play football at weekends?”把“play”改为“playing ”.

我敢说这里不绝对不止十处错。

Dear Ms Taylor

Football is my favourite sport .when it is comes to football I always have much to say.Recently I often quarrel with my mother about whether i could play football with my classmates at weekends. My mother holds the view strongly that I should devote all my spare time to studying all the subjects well. In her opinion only when I try my best to study that I am able to admitte to an university. But I really can`t accept her view. As far as I amconcerned,playing football not only. builds up my strength and makes me full of energy evergy every day. could you give me some advice on how to persuade my mother to allow me to play football at weekends?