1, bacation are coming 改为 is coming
2, very hardly 改为 very hard
3，made up my minds 改为made up my mind 不要复数
4，first time 前面加 the
5，to visiting me 改为 to visit me
6，when they came here 改为when they come here
7，surpising for them改为surprise for them
8，done a lot for me 改为 done a lot to me
9，that I did anyting 改为that I do
10，that I did anything 的anything 改为something
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