帮忙修改一下 英语不好 谢谢

在改之间说明一点，阁下的表达非常有中式英语的风格，这样表达不地道哦~~

由于心脏病发作，他被很快的送进了当地医院
He was sent to local hospital quicklu because of his heart disease.
（心脏病是heart disease）

警方想等那人苏醒过来之后问他一些问题
The police want to ask the man some questions when he come around.
（警察一般口语才说cops，一些问题要在questions后面加s；苏醒是come around）

他的帮助使得我到机场时正好赶上飞机

With his help, I managed to catch the plane in time.

英语使得我们能够和许多不会汉语得人交流

English helps us to coumminicate with lots of people who cannot speak Chinese.

他认真听着演讲 还不是在笔记本里写几个字

He listens to the speech carefully, and takes some notes now and then.

这个小男孩不敢出门 所以他紧紧抓住她妈妈的手

The little boy is afraid of going outside, so he holds his mother's hand tightly.

通知农民暴风雨就要来临还不算太晚

It is not too late to inform the farmers that the storm is coming.

我们都以为那封重要的信不见了 原来他一直锁在保险柜里

We all thought that important letter was lost while it is locked in the safe all the time.

你妹妹正在哭 她出了什莫事？

Your sister is crying. What happend to her?

他太忙了 没时间注意这样的小事

He is too busy to pay attention to such little things.

电影中那个好心肠的老人最后怎样了

What happened to he kind-hearted old man in the end of the film?

希望能够帮到你，欢迎追问~

1好像意思变了，应该是“was sent to" 被送去，‘很快’就用副词quickly 就好 2 好像没多大问题 3 应该是 help sb.do sth. / to do sth. 或许用上 with the help of him 在他帮助下也不错 4 连接不是太好，用一个定语从句 somone who can't speak chinese 你的翻译起来似乎有点不同意思了 5 listening 不是谓语 可用 listens 其余不太确定 6 be afraid to do sth. 恩 有时候副词可以放在句末的，就好像 so he holds his mother hand tightly 7 will +动词原形 or be going to 表将来 8all of us think the very important letter disappearanced 后面不懂 9 your sister is crying and what happend to her 10 pay attention to 可用 so ....that ....句型11 用
what about （希望没有误导你）

由于心脏病发作，他被很快的送进了当地医院

he was immediately sent to the local hospital because of the heart attack.

**想等那人苏醒过来之后问他一些问题

cops want to ask the man some questions after he comes out

他的帮助使得我到机场时正好赶上飞机

with his help, I was able to catch the plan when I arrived in the airport.

英语使得我们能够和许多不会汉语得人交流
English enables us to communicate with many other people who don't know Chinese.

他认真听着演讲 还不是在笔记本里写几个字

he listened to the speech carefully and sometimes took some notes in his book .

这个小男孩不敢出门 所以他紧紧抓住她妈妈的手

the little boy is afraid of going out, so he holds tightly his mother's hand.

通知农民暴风雨就要来临还不算太晚

It's not too late to tell farmers that the storm is coming.
我们都以为那封重要的信不见了 原来他一直锁在保险柜里

we all thought the important letter was missing, but in fact it was locked in the safety box.

你妹妹正在哭 她出了什莫事？

your sister is crying ,what has happened to her?

他太忙了 没时间注意这样的小事
he is so busy that he pay little attention to such kind of trivial things.

电影中那个好心肠的老人最后怎样
what happened to the kind old man in the movie?