简单的英文翻译,达人帮忙检查下,感谢!

1.那天天气很好
It was sunny that day.可以。或者The weather's fine that day.
2.公司离我的宿舍太远,我不得不花很多时间在路上.
The company is so far away from my dorm that I had(说的是一般情况，用现在时就行，改为have) to spend much time on the way.
3.下周日有一个关于"爱护流浪动物"的公益活动.
There will be a public activity about "saving homeless animals" on(on去掉) next sunday.
4.All of the hotels had no room.(这里的room要不要加s?)
我觉得这句子这样改比较好，All of the hotels had no available rooms
5.如果他做到了,他就是一个好老板.
He will be a good boss if he makes it.
6.你的经验比较缺乏,你怎么看?
How do you see /think of your inexperience?
是的,我与贵公司是有差距,但是我相信,在不长的时间里,我会达到贵公司的要求.
well, there is a gap between your company and I, but I believe I will be qualified for the job very soon

1.那天天气很好
It was really good weather that day.或者It was sunny that day.
2.公司离我的宿舍太远,我不得不花很多时间在路上.
The company is so far away from my dorm that I had to spend much time on the way.
3.下周日有一个关于"爱护流浪动物"的公益活动.
There will be a public activity about "saving homeless animals" next Sunday.
4.None of the hotels had any rooms vacant .===All of the hotels had their rooms full.(
5.如果他做到了,他就是一个好老板.He will be a good boss if he has done it. / He will be a good boss if ha can make it.
6.你的经验比较缺乏,你怎么看?What do you think of the fact that you lack experience?
是的,我与贵公司是有差距,但是我相信,在不长的时间里,我会达到贵公司的要求
Yes, I still fall short of the expectations of your company,but very soon, I will meet your requirements.

1. 可以。
2. 不错。
3. 也行。 on next sunday 最好把on 去掉
4. room加上s
5. If he made it, he is just a good boss.
6. What do you think that you are lack of experience?
Yes, there is a short gap between your company and me. But I believe I can meet your requirements in the near future.

1.可以，不过一般这样说：Today is a nice day.
2.spend so much time/spend such a long time
3.对
4.have no room.
5.If he did it ,then he is a good boss.
6.That seems like you are lack of experience,how do you think?
yes,there is a gap between your company and me ,but I believe I can achieve your requirement for a short time
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4.不需要
5.如果他做到了,他就是一个好老板.
If he does, he is a good boss
6.你的经验比较缺乏,你怎么看?
The relative lack of your experience, what do you think?
是的,我与贵公司是有差距,但是我相信,在不长的时间里,我会达到贵公司的要求.
Yes, I and your company there is a gap, but I believe that in the not long time, I will reach the requirements of your company.

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If he does, he is a good boss
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Your relative lack of experience, how do you see?
Yes, I am with your company is a gap, but I believe that in a short time, I will meet your requirements.