应该是
outside the room was a boy eating an apple
副词或地点状语放句首,倒装的结构是
【副词或地点状语+助动词+主语+谓语+宾语】
有不会的可以再问我
不对,
改为:Outside the room was a boy eating an apple.
改得不对。
这个句子没办法改成倒装句。
A bus is coming 可以改成 Here comes a bus.
如果单纯想把这个句子的语法结构提高,可以用There be 句型
There is a boy eating an apple out side the room.
不对,就是Outside the room , the boy is eating an apple ,你那个句子把主语宾语放一起了,
outside the room ,a boy was eating an apple
Outside the room was a boy eating an apple