急求……初三英语作文改错O(∩_∩)O谢谢

How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I (1have)had so many memories in three years’ life. On(2one) of them impressed me very much(3very much→the most). I still remember,(,→the time) when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still(still→just) couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as(as soon as→but then) my English teacher found my problem,(,→and...初中少用逗号,相信我...) she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. (Since then, she has kept helping me→she has been helping me since then,华丽). Little by little, I’ve become(more) interested in English and(now) I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to (become→be,不表动作) one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others

1、I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. 改为 I have studied in middle school for three years. And I will graduate in a month.
2、I had so many memories ……had 改为 have
3、On of them……改为One of them
4、 As soon as 改为While
5、trouble改为troubles