memory -> memories
bought -> brought
was going -> went
since -> when
was -> \
specially -> special
them -> it
or -> and
over her -> her over
最后一行应该没问题
one of my unforgettable memory of my school in (memories)
xinjiang is that of lunches we bought form our homes. (from)<===brought?打错字?
i hold my lunch—box in my hand when i was going to (held)
school.the smell from it was very good .since the lunch (since改成when)<===不确定
bell finally rang ,my friend aigulie was used (删去was)
to share her nang with me.nang is a specially kind of (special)
cake in xingjiang.i like them very much.now aigulie and (them改成it)
i study at different colleges or we can only see each other (or改成and)
during the summer vacation .I think over her a lot and i miss (over改成about)
the food and the good time we had together
memory: memories
bought: brought
going: on the way
it: the lunch box
去掉finally
a specially kind of: a kind of special
them: it
or: and
over: about
had together : had been together
one of my unforgettable memory of my school in (memory-memories)
xinjiang is that of lunches we bought form our homes. (form-from)
i hold my lunch—box in my hand when i was going to (hand-hands)
school.the smell from it was very good .since the lunch (from-of)
bell finally rang ,my friend aigulie was used (was删掉)
to share her nang with me.nang is a specially kind of (specially-special)
cake in xingjiang.i like them very much.now aigulie and (them-it)
i study at different colleges or we can only see each other (at-in)
during the summer vacation .I think over her a lot and i miss (over-about)
the food and the good time we had together (had-spent或者删掉together)
1. memory ----memories 2.is ----was 3.in-----with 4.from ----of 5.was 去掉 6.specially-----special
7.them *------it 8.or----and 9.over ----of 10.we 和had 中间加一个have. 只供参考~~~~
memory——memories
去掉of
was going——went
from前加came或者out
since——once
specially——special
them——it
or——and
over——about
最后一句没错吧