请老师帮忙改改英语作文，谢谢！

这篇英文作业很好，翻译过来就是：亲爱的埃里克，谢谢你的邮件告诉我你有多想在中国工作。事实上，新世纪需要一个国际销售经理。要得到这份工作，你需要一系列的技能。其中包括流利的英语和汉语，以及善于沟通。你在销售方面的成功是一个优势，因为公司会任命在这方面有5-10年经验的人。更重要的是，你的大学学位是必须的，当然，你需要经常出差。如果你感兴趣，请将你的英文简历发送到cncc@-hotmail.com。
没有错误，是一份合格的英文作业。

Thank you for writing to express your interests in working in China. New Century currently has an open position for International sales manager. .............. (now you need to describe the functions and responsibilities of the sales position, then qualifications - who will qualify for the job - which you have described here and there in your reply).

If you are interested in this position, please send your CV ...........

Sincerely,

Dear Eric,

Thank you for your email expressing your interest in working in China. As it happens, New Century is in need of an international sales manager. To qualify for this job, you will need to possess a range of skills, including fluency in English and Chinese, as well as excellent communication skills. Your previous success in sales would be an advantage, as the company is looking for someone with 5-10 years of experience in this field. Additionally, a university degree is required, and you should be prepared to travel for business regularly.

If you are interested in this opportunity, please send your English CV to cncc@hotmail.com.

Sincerely,

Li Hua

挺好，不过----------
Thanks for your email telling me how much you want to work in china------Thanks for your email and thanks for telling me how much you want to work in China
这样是不是更好些呢？

不错 不错