谁能帮我写一篇关于 我的礼物 的英语作文啊！！！不用很长的..60多个词就够了

　　It was my birthday yesterday. I got a lot of gifts. All of them were covered with coloured paper. Among them there were two interesting ones. My elder sister gave me a round paper bag and I thought it was a football. BUt when I opened it, it turned out to be a clock. My brother gave me a message, saying that "My present has been put in your bedroom. "As soon as I went into my bedroom, I found a box. I opened it and found a laptop. I was very happy. These two presents aim to let me study hard and not to waste time.
　　昨天是我的生日，我收到了很多礼物。它们用彩纸包着，其中有两件有趣的东西。 我姐姐送了我一个圆纸包，开始我认为是个足球，但打开后才发现是一个闹钟。我哥给我留了张条，告诉我：“我的礼物已经放在你的卧室里了。”我走进卧室，发现一个盒子。我打开了它，里面是一台笔记本电脑。我非常高兴。 这两件礼物是为了让我好好学习，抓紧时间。 Yesterday was my birthday and I received a lot of presents. These presents were packed in coloured paper and two of them were funny and interesting, which impressed me.[ My sister sent a bag of present to me. The bag was big and round. I though it was a football. But when I opened it, I saw a clock. The other one was given by my brother. He left me a message, which said "my present is lying in your bedroom". When I got to my bedroom, I found a laptop. Oh!Great! I jumped with joy. I know, they Want me to study hard and not to I would never forget this birthday.
　　昨天是我的生日，我收到了许多生日礼物，并且这些礼物都用彩纸包着。其中两件礼物很好玩很有趣，给我留下了很深的印象。 我姐姐送给我一个包，这包又大又圆。我认为是足球，可打开一看是个闹钟。另外一件礼物是我哥哥送给我的，他给我留了一张纸条，上面写着：“我的礼物放在你的卧室里。”当我进入卧室时，我看到了一台笔记本电脑。噢!真是太棒了!我高兴地跳了起来-。我明白他们想让我努力学习，不要浪费时间。 我将永远不会忘记昨天。星酷~