今年考宁外。各位帮忙写一份英语自荐书。。。 呃。我毕业于实验小学。乐观开朗。积极向上 大致内容如下：

My name is XXX.I am 13 years old. I am from experimental primary school. I am very glad to write so a ZiJianShu to assess their ability to learn.
This year's I will face graduates, I also will choose to suit oneself schools in junior high school three years of study. But the school is ningbo foreign language school. I know everyone will have a his mind right, while I have the schools to better outside. Not only because of the new campus of temple with beautiful environment quiet outside, but also because the name of outside rather face foreign languages. Foreign language is English, I for English on the one hand, has enough self-confidence. In two years of shane English learning of English, I was interested, English speaking, writing is becoming more and more outstanding. Choose better outside, and not just because of that, but also because of always, better to me outside very attractive, she has a long history and profound cultural connotation, rich teaching resources, good academic atmosphere, strong times breath, for social nurtured many outstanding talents. In recent years many excellent students in our school of choice for many school first choice, I also very eager to get your school in July this year the admission notice, become your a student, become a to society, and the motherland useful talents. From learning achievement has been leading of I, with their own efforts was admitted to his ideal middle - better outside, fourth grade, I began to struggle. After three years, I have to temper from a simple and lively female this growth for strong-willed, profound, mature inside collect, deeply loves the life, has the compassion, caring, self-motivated, intelligence and physique full scale development to outstanding students.
I love life, always full of confidence of life and hope. In this beautiful world, I enjoy the beauty of flowers in spring, autumn, the warmth of the passion, strong-minded.it summer rain toughness. I like to feel pleasure, I hope your happiness on to me and everyone around me cheering for the strong for the weak tears, send people rose, I believe saved. I have very good students in the class is not just because of my margin more from my class cadre post, simple, frank, warm personality. I often took pains to the classmate speak a had been told many times, I announced the math problem for students to learn English public my best know-how, I will learn more than in the library with my classmates to navigate in the sea of knowledge, go to KTV intoxicated in beautiful melody.
I am a work resolute, assertive, willing to put the initiative is own hands, I like actively learn no pressure, the sort of relaxed learning environment more easily reach twice the result with half the effort, when I play out, but I forget yourself in studying will put yourself into it. Once face difficult, will be very instinctively to play out full potential. I often use less time can learn to others in the standard study time can acquire knowledge, I always spend time and completed part of others the same task with others.
Ningbo foreign language school, is my dream school hall, if I'm the lucky, I will plan the National People's Congress in the direction of the National People's Congress I, I hope I can in one of knowledge, not only is knowledge, more dedicated to the motherland, for national rejuvenation contribute the sentiment. In the academic active ning outside, I will try to attend some groups, BBS and various activities, compensate for my former shortage, exercise my ability, honed himself into ningbo foreign language school student has the unique culture grade, special talents and good comprehensive quality of talents.
Will your school leadership can accept my application, to realize my ideal.

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很高兴帮助你，因为我刚好上一届考宁外，因为出国所以所有名校全部放弃。我在夏恩也读了5年了。0 0 ……
虽然我没有太多的时间帮妹妹翻译，也怕我翻错了。不过，我可以帮妹妹修改这篇文章大致内容。宁外竞争很激烈，妹妹应该也知道。所以不但英文要好，内容一定要突出。很显然，你的文章定根其他的学生一样差不多，这种文章我见多了。我的建议是，你的抱负，你的理想，你以后要做一个有用的人，用哈佛的一句话是，”我们来到知识的海洋是为了学习到更多，当我们走出哈佛，是为了更好的回报社会和国家。“而不是草草的结尾写你的未来，这回觉得很短见。仅仅是为了考宁外而已。

还有，你虽然这样写，恩，我知道你非常想把你的文采发挥在英文上，但是你是不是举得单词量很少很少，根本就达不到转换的水平。那就用最简单的语言去写，去摘抄原英文名句，引用。而不是去找人翻译。
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