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我的狗狗。请看照片。这是我可爱的小狗。它的名字是鲍比。它有褐色的皮毛。一双水汪汪的大眼睛带有少许智慧。湿乎乎的鼻子说明，它非常健康。健壮的四肢使它看起来很强壮和漂亮。每当我看到它，就想给它一个拥抱。每天回家，它会摇晃尾巴，兴奋地跳跃，叫声欢迎。它喜欢睡觉。在大多数情况下，它会蜷缩睡在自己的狗屋里。有时打鼾。如果我有任何动作，它会立即醒来，微微抬起头，警惕地看着四周。那时，它看起来像一只狐狸。鲍比吃饭是很可笑的。在大多数情况下是坐着吃，有时会躺着吃。它往往是狡猾的看着我，如果我来了，它会立即低着头，挡住了自己的碗，以免夺走它的食物。我非常喜欢鲍比，鲍比也爱我。但是我在网上看到,最近，有很多虐待狗的图片。我很心痛。狗没有朋友，只有我们。我们应该善待他们，爱他们，不要伤害他们！
英文改动如下：
My dog. Look at the picture. This is my lovely dog. Its name is Bobby. It has brown fur. A pair of watery big eyes with a hint of sagacity. Its wet nose says it is very healthy. Robust limbs make it look strong and handsome. Every time I see it I want to give it a hug. When I come home every day, it will shake its tail, jumping excitedly, barking to welcome me. It likes sleeping. Most of the time, it huddles to sleep in the its house, and sometimes snores. If I have any action, it will immediately wake up, slightly raises its head, lookes warily around. At that time it looks like a fox. It is very funny for Bobby to have its meal. Most of the time it is sitting to eat, sometimes it is lying down to eat. And it often slyly looks at me, if I come,it will immediately lower its head, warding off its own bowl, to prevent I to grab its food. I very love Bobby, Bobby is also love me. But I see online recently, there are a lot of pictures showing the abuse of the dog. I am very heartbreaking. Dog has not friend except us. So we should be kind to them, love them, and don't hurt them!

Look atthe picture---Look at the picture。
Its name is bobby--It's name is Bobby.
eyeswith-- eyes with .
Wet nose said i twas ---Wet nose shows it is
Robust limbs to makeit look strong and handsome--it lookS strong and handsome with...
Every time I see it want to give it a hug---I want to give it a hug when I see it
Came home every day----Every day when I come back home
it will be shaking itstail----it shaks its tail
It likes to sleep--- It likes sleeping
it will huddledsleep in the its house---it - huddls and sleeps in the it's house
Sometimes snore-- Sometimes it snores
If I have any action,it will beimmediately wake up--If I do something ,it can wake up immediately slightly raised head---- raiseing head slightly
looked warily ---looking warily
Bobby have a meal is very funny--it is very funny when Bobby has a meal
Most of the time it was sit to eat--Most of time it sit to eat
it will be lying down to eat--- it lies down to eat
And it was often sly--And it isvery sly
,if I come,it will immediatelylow head --It put down its head immediately when I come
ward off its own bowl,lest Igrab it food---catching its own bowl to keep it food
I very love Bobby,Bobby is also love me-- I love Bobby very much and Bobby also loves me

But I see online recently,there wera a lot ofabuse the picture of the dog.I am very heartache.----
But there are a lot of injurious pictures of dogs online recently .I am very heartache at it .
Dog out friend,it is onlyus.So we should be kind to them,love them,don't hurt them!-----Dogs are our friends.So we should be kind to them and love them.Please don't hurt them!
最大的问题是时态问题，不应该使用过去式和将来时态。因为写狗的习惯性动作等，需要使用一般现在时态。另外，最好是用拟人来写，用He 代替it 更好。此外，中国式英语表达得太多，很多不符合英语的句式。

翻译就比较简单了，相信你们自己可以搞定的。

很棒，就俩处错误