Are you OK? I hope you're well. Do the A/H1N1 ful cases spread to your school? Do you need to go to school?If you don't have to go to school, you should stay at home and don't go to crowded palces in case to prevent yourself to get sick . Anyway, you should often wash your hands to ensure personal hygiene and open the windows to keep the air fresh. You should eat more vegetables and fruit too.(78 words)
还有, From the TV know many A/H1N1 ful case reported recently这一句是错的,应该改为 From the TV,I know there are many A/H1N1 ful case are reported recently.
many schools are closed这一句是错的, 应该改为many school are suspended.
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How did you feel?Are there any other H1N1ful cases?And the patients are still attending classes?There are several advises for.first,you`d better stay at home instead of staying places filled with many people.secondly,wash your hands as possible as you can.third,keep the air fresh.The last one, have more fruits and vegetables.