My father is a teacher,I am very respect him,my brother is very archness and often make me angry,but I also very love him. Welcome to HeNan and LoYan when you free.
Now I live in Taibo garden Meicun new developed area.There are many electron factories which just grow up around .It is a beautiful town,I like the circumstance and the culture atmosphere.
Dad is a teacher and i admire him very much. My little brother is elvish but i still like him. Welcome to Henan Luoyang.
Now I live besides Taibo garden of Mei village new zone. There are lots of electronic factroies here. This is also a beautiful town and i love the environment and culture there.
唉~~~这几个句子之间的连接实在是不好整,这也许就是这个小问题也要40分的原因吧:)
Dad is a teacher.I 'm proud of him.my younger brother is so naughty,but I always like him.Welcome all of you to visit LUOYANG in HENAN.
Now I'm living in MEIcun xin area taibo garden .So many electron factory which build new,It's also a beautiful village .I like the environment and culture there.
My father is a teacher, I respect him very much.
My younger brother is very naughty and makes me angry offen, but I still love him.
Welcome to Henan, to Luoyang when you are available.
I live in Taibo Garden, Meicun new district now. There are many newly built electronic factory around. It is a beautiful town as well. I like the environment and culture there.