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Hello, thank you for your time reading this application. As a student from China, I'd like to join this summer camp in America.
I've always want to join a camp because there I can challenge myself in many ways. I have been a sweet heart in my family since I was born, and My mom and dad keep dealing things for me, thus I don't have many chance to solve problems on my own, and this camp can give me this opportunity. Besides, in this camp, I can also get a lot of good. Climbing mountains makes me tough, fishing makes me patient, hiking makes me healthy. What's more, living,eating and interacting with other students can never happen in my daily life.Such experience can be of great value in my life. Finally, I can learn many new things in the USA, for example what the real American life is. This is a wonderful chance for a cultural exchange. I believe I should take my chance. To sum up, I think it's an awesome way to be independent, to get myself trained, to make new friends and to experience real American life.
If I'm lucky enough to get that opportunity, please inform me. I think I can do as good as American students do and I will. I'm looking forward to your responce.Thank you.
Yours sincerely
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I am a student in China.I would like to join this camp in the USA.Because I want to look after myself well for a short time.
I think I need a chance to train myself.so I hope you can agree .
If you agree,hear from me soon.I think I am as good as American.

Dear Sir/Madamn

My name is _(你的名字)_, i am a student at _(学校名字)_, China. I was delighted to hear about a camp at your School, in America. It has been my dream to visit America. To see the statue of liberty, to visit the big apple and to see Hollywood. Also, I have always been interested in America's culture. So this camp would not only provide a chance for me to finally see America, it would also give me the opportunity to try an apple pie and watch a baseball game. If you accept me, not only will you be furfilling my dream, you will give me a chance to see if i could survive without my parents And you will be the first one to offer me the opportunity to step out into the world. So please, consider me as a worthy candidate for this camp.

Your Sincerly,
_(你的名字)_