请帮忙找出英语作文的错误 很感谢！小女子感激涕零！！！

a half 改为half
She was dubbed "small pig" by her classmates who thought that it is a kindly nickname. 改为现在时态is,think,kindly改为kind
At first she knew that there is a kind of surgery can help her get thin. can前面加that,定语从句
there is a kind of drug as the auxiliary therapy can helps people lose weight quickly. 同上，can前面加that,定语从句
she rush to the shopping mall to buy it.过去时态,rushed
The doctor told to her 把to去掉
Lily get no beneficial from her beauty 第三人称单数，动词改为gets
Good flavours still attracts her like a megnet这里用复数,attract