英语短文：难忘的一件事

when I was in the primary school ,I had a unforgetful thing between me and my teacher. it was a class we studied by ourselves when our English teacher came in and was ready to answer our questions. suddenly she passed by me and touched my hands whispering that my hands felt cold and I should put on more clothes. I was moved . 

she was my teacher but sometimes she seemed like a mother. it was sweet and unforgotfu thing in my life. 

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 In my heart,there hides a secret,a a serect that only belongs to me and my rommate.

  It was in a  cold and windy morning,I and one of my roomates were walking hurrily to go to  the class.It was then when we suddenly hear something strange from the bushes along the road.Everyone around was scurrying because of the bad weather and none had noticed that sound except us.When we tried to aproach to check what was going on there.To our greatest surprise,we saw a femal cat was painfully giving birth to babies.It was our first time to see the scene.And of course we had scared the mother cat.She wanted to escape only to find that herself was totally exhausted.We paced back in order not to make her worry and tried to convice her that we were not dangerous.In case that someone might found and hurt her,we decided to stay as the denfender for her inspite of the fact that we would be late for class.So both my roomate and I were enduring in the frigid wind beside the bush.Before we left we even left our breakfast for her as well as for her babies.

  Untill so far we haven't told anyone about that story.I wish someday in the campuse we may come across that female cat behind whom are its lovely babies 

《1》In my heart,there hides a secret,a a serect that only belongs to me and my rommate.

  It was in a  cold and windy morning,I and one of my roomates were walking hurrily to go to  the class.It was then when we suddenly hear something strange from the bushes along the road.Everyone around was scurrying because of the bad weather and none had noticed that sound except us.When we tried to aproach to check what was going on there.To our greatest surprise,we saw a femal cat was painfully giving birth to babies.It was our first time to see the scene.And of course we had scared the mother cat.She wanted to escape only to find that herself was totally exhausted.We paced back in order not to make her worry and tried to convice her that we were not dangerous.In case that someone might found and hurt her,we decided to stay as the denfender for her inspite of the fact that we would be late for class

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In my heart,there hides a secret,a a serect that only belongs to me and my rommate.
It was in a cold and windy morning,I and one of my roomates were walking hurrily to go to the class.It was then when we suddenly hear something strange from the bushes along the road.Everyone around was scurrying because of the bad weather and none had noticed that sound except us.When we tried to aproach to check what was going on there.To our greatest surprise,we saw a femal cat was painfully giving birth to babies.It was our first time to see the scene.And of course we had scared the mother cat.She wanted to escape only to find that herself was totally exhausted.We paced back in order not to make her worry and tried to convice her that we were not dangerous.In case that someone might found and hurt her,we decided to stay as the denfender for her inspite of the fact that we would be late for class.So both my roomate and I were enduring in the frigid wind beside the bush.Before we left we even left our breakfast for her as well as for her babies.
Untill so far we haven't told anyone about that story.I wish someday in the campuse we may come across that female cat behind whom are its lovely babies

when I was in the primary school ,I had a unforgetful thing between me and my teacher. it was a class we studied by ourselves when our English teacher came in and was ready to answer our questions. suddenly she passed by me and touched my hands whispering that my hands felt cold and I should put on more clothes. I was moved .
she was my teacher but sometimes she seemed like a mother. it was sweet and unforgotfu thing in my life.

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In my heart,there hides a secret,a a serect that only belongs to me and my rommate.
It was in a cold and windy morning,I and one of my roomates were walking hurrily to go to the class.It was then when we suddenly hear something strange from the bushes along the road.Everyone around was scurrying because of the bad weather and none had noticed that sound except us.When we tried to aproach to check what was going on there.To our greatest surprise,we saw a femal cat was painfully giving birth to babies.It was our first time to see the scene.And of course we had scared the mother cat.She wanted to escape only to find that herself was totally exhausted.We paced back in order not to make her worry and tried to convice her that we were not dangerous.In case that someone might found and hurt her,we decided to stay as the denfender for her inspite of the fact that we would be late for class