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Good afternoon everyone! I'm glad that I could have a chance to introduce myself here today. My name is XXX, a XX-year-old boy/girl from XXX. I'm a outgoing person who like to work with colleagues. I believe that communicating is a necessary skill to learn from others. I like to have a talk with customers as well, so that I could know their requests better and provide satisfactory service. In my spare time, I like doing reading and searching from the Internet to make my life more colorful. What's more, I enjoy listening to music, especially classic and light music. I feel relaxed without any presure when I'm in the music. Definitely, I love English very much though my English is not very well. I wish I had a nice performance today. 唔该晒！（= =||开个玩笑…）Thanks a lot！
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Good afternoon dear teachers!
It's my pleasure to be here to introduce myself to all of you. I'm XXX from XXX, X years old.
My personality is very extrovert and easy-going. I'd like to communicate with my colleagues so that I can learn from them. I'd like to communicate with my customers so that I can know what they are really need.
Reading and surfing in the internet are my favorate things. They help me to enrich my knowledge. Music is also my interest.Such as the classical music, light music,and pop music. They can help me to release pressure. Certainly I like English too,even if my English is not good enough.
Hope me to give you a good impression. Thank you.